How Language Choices Affect the Reader

Question 1

Read the two short sentences below. Sentence 1 (Author Maya): “The night sky was a velvet curtain, dotted with silver stitches.” Sentence 2 (Author Leo): “The night sky was as soft as a quilt, speckled with tiny stars.” Both sentences use figurative language to describe the night sky. Which statement best explains how the two authors create a similar feeling for the reader?

Accepted Answer

Each author compares the sky to a gentle piece of fabric, so the reader feels the night is calm and comforting.

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Maya’s metaphor makes the sky seem mysterious, while Leo’s simile makes it seem noisy, so the feelings are opposite.

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Because one sentence uses a metaphor and the other a simile, they give the night completely different moods.

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Both writers focus on bright colors, which makes the night feel exciting and lively.

Question 2

In the sentence "The thunder was a giant drum beating across the sky," what effect does this metaphor have on the reader?

Accepted Answer

It makes the thunder seem loud and powerful, creating a feeling of excitement or awe.

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It tells us the thunder is actually a drum being played in the sky.

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It suggests that the sky is making music.

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It implies that the thunder is quiet and gentle.

Question 3

Read the following sentence: "The wind whispered through the trees, carrying the scent of fresh pine." How does the author's use of the word "whispered" affect the reader's understanding of the wind?

Accepted Answer

It makes the wind seem gentle and soft.

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It shows the wind is invisible.

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It suggests the wind is loud and powerful.

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It indicates the wind is dangerous.

Try three questions

In the sentence "The thunder was a giant drum beating across the sky," what effect does this metaphor have on the reader?

Read the following sentence: "The wind whispered through the trees, carrying the scent of fresh pine." How does the author's use of the word "whispered" affect the reader's understanding of the wind?

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