Planning Narratives

Question 1

Read this short excerpt from a story: "The abandoned playground smelled of rusted metal and stale popcorn; the swings creaked in the wind, and twilight painted the slide a bruised purple." Which of the following planning sentences would best let you build a similarly vivid setting for your own story about a hidden garden?

Accepted Answer

I will mention the scent of damp earth and the rustle of leaves, describe the fading light turning the pond's surface silver, and include the squeak of old wooden benches.

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I will describe the garden as a quiet place with bright flowers and a gentle breeze.

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I will tell the reader that the garden is mysterious and spooky.

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I will focus on the main character's feelings as they walk into the garden, without describing the surroundings.

Question 2

Read the excerpt: "When Maya slipped on the icy path, she clenched her fists, her breath puffing out in quick clouds, and she hurried home, her cheeks flushed with embarrassment." Which authorial technique is being used to develop Maya’s character?

Accepted Answer

Showing the character's feelings through her actions

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Telling the reader directly that she feels embarrassed

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Having another character describe her personality

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Describing the icy path to set the mood

Question 3

Read the following excerpt: "Mia slipped on the wet floor, her hands trembling as she clutched the broken vase. She stared at the shards, her eyes filling with tears." Which authorial technique is being used to develop Mia’s character?

Accepted Answer

Showing Mia’s feelings through her actions

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Describing the rainy weather outside to match her mood

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Having Mia say, “I am sad,” in dialogue

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Telling the reader directly that Mia feels sad

Try three questions

Read the excerpt: "When Maya slipped on the icy path, she clenched her fists, her breath puffing out in quick clouds, and she hurried home, her cheeks flushed with embarrassment." Which authorial technique is being used to develop Maya’s character?

Read the following excerpt: "Mia slipped on the wet floor, her hands trembling as she clutched the broken vase. She stared at the shards, her eyes filling with tears." Which authorial technique is being used to develop Mia’s character?

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